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Postby Candle » Thu May 11, 2006 1:20 am

Add or fix what you see wrong ..
Stuff between the " "
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// dialog script file
@S  // dialog startup entry point
EGO: " Hello anyone there?"
return
@1  // option 1
EGO: " Hello anyone there?"
ROBERT: " Yes I'm in here.... Help me ."
EGO:" How can I help you get out?"
EGO: " I don't see a way to open the door?."
return
@2  // option 2
ROBERT: "I don't know how I got in here so I don't know how to get out but I did hear some voices and one was a womens voices."
ROBERT:" Sounded like the girl I was talking to before I woke up here."
EGO: "You where at a party talking to a girl before you woke up here?"
ROBERT: "Yes I was .... that mean anything to you?"
return
@3  // option 3
ROBERT: "I told you I don't know how I got here, but I remember hearing a lot of people after I woke up inside of here."
EGO: " Well that should be some help maybe."
return
@4  // option 4
ROBERT: " I think maybe a day or two?... It is hard to tell in here with no windows."
EGO: " I Haven't seen anything that looks like a window after I woke up."
return
@5  // option 5
ROBERT: " Yes I was! Before I woke up here."
ROBERT:" I was talking to this girl and I went to get some more drinks and she was talking to some new guy so I just blew it off and was going to go home and the next thing I woke up here."
return
@6  // option 6
ROBERT: " No I didn't see anything when I went out side but darkness.
EGO: " Well I will try to get us both out of here if I can so stay where you are so I can find you again."
stop

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Postby dk627 » Thu May 11, 2006 2:09 am

EGO: " I don't see a way to open the door?."
get rid of question mark

ROBERT: "I don't know how I got in here so I don't know how to get out but I did hear some voices and one was a womens voices."
make it "woman's"

EGO: "You where at a party talking to a girl before you woke up here?"
you were at

ROBERT:" I was talking to this girl and I went to get some more drinks and she was talking to some new guy so I just blew it off and was going to go home and the next thing I woke up here."
???and the next think i know i woke up here????

ROBERT: " No I didn't see anything when I went out side but darkness.
make "outside"
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Postby Candle » Thu May 11, 2006 2:32 am

Tanx for the help.
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Postby Harvester » Sat May 13, 2006 5:21 pm

not did hear but heard at Robert I guess
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