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Some Idea

Postby skype6 » Fri Nov 28, 2014 6:13 pm

Nothing fancy, classic adventure game, so I'm interested in what you think...

You're in an abandoned mountain bungalow with a letter in your hands, its from your brother, the black sheep of the family, longtime convict and punk, shame for the whole family. He asks you to come to the meeting place since he has some information and evidence that could endanger some important people from the world of business and politics. He says that he regrets for what he had done wrong in his life, and now, at the very end, wants to clear his name.

In search for your brother through abandoned and ruined rooms, you will slowly uncover the truth about this seemingly forsaken place. You will find out that after being released from prison a certain Mr. Smith offered the job to your brother, to maintain and take care of this bungalow...

According to the evidences, notes, diary pages and items on which you'll encounter, brand new pictures of this abandoned place will begin to appear in front of your eyes. You'll check that place only for a few minutes and if you don't find him, you will leave this filthy hole and his crazy ideas ....or maybe it will not be so easy....
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Re: Some Idea

Postby reneuend » Sun Nov 30, 2014 3:55 am

Hi Skype.
It sounds like it has a lot of potential. I can see where this might lead to multiple possible outcomes.
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Re: Some Idea

Postby skype6 » Sun Nov 30, 2014 8:16 pm

He,he..Well,yes! For now the idea is still in the development stage and it will have a hint of thriller and horror, but we'll see.
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Re: Some Idea

Postby brankomaster » Mon Dec 01, 2014 11:02 pm

Krećemo!!! :twisted:
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Re: Some Idea

Postby brankomaster » Wed Dec 24, 2014 12:27 am

Im working on the story for this game with my colleague skype6, he previously joined the forum and started communicating with members.
Essentially this is nothing new, old recipe but ingredients and pot are ours, however, we have chosen a very difficult and strange way for the realization of our project (due to our experience). We have no n.p.c . ‘s, narrator, dialogues or flashbacks. Your only source of informations are actors comments and observations of objects around the house. There are some notes, diary pages and personal items which create a picture of your brother current life, but lot of informations are mostly childhood memories and life before he entered the world of criminal (which are not so useful for the current state of things) but we are building a picture of the brothers character. Very important for us is to find the right balance between the necessary amount of information that player gets and the overall picture he should compile, we do not want the player to be buried beneath piles of useless information but also not bring him into a situation that he can’t understand the story because lack of inputs.
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