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Feedback on artwork for a game I am working on

Postby wezyap » Tue Jan 02, 2007 2:13 pm

Hi, I want feedback on this model of a airship dock I am working on for a game I am making, I haven't done the texturing jet, and I am not happy about the wall/gate thing. The plan is to place it on the edge of a cliff whit two waterfalls one on each side of the dock.
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Seems

Postby Harvester » Tue Jan 02, 2007 11:11 pm

Seems to be a good base for a scene. You should add more details, but I guess you know that. If you will texture it and put it on the scenery you mentioned, I think it will be easier to give a feedback.
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Re: Seems

Postby wezyap » Wed Jan 03, 2007 2:00 am

Harvester wrote:Seems to be a good base for a scene. You should add more details, but I guess you know that. If you will texture it and put it on the scenery you mentioned, I think it will be easier to give a feedback.


I will do that as soon as I am home again, I am visiting my parents for some days now =)
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