My Factory (Using Sketchup)

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My Factory (Using Sketchup)

Postby Jaked » Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:00 am

Not much better than my old one, if I made an improvement at all! This is not able to be used for other games, as it is for my Death's Shadow game.
You eventually are able to go inside!
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Postby Zenoc2 » Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:05 am

This is actually much better- you're using more realistic textures, and the whole thing seems more symmetrical, more professional. Now you just need to learn how to use a renderer to make your shots look even better.

Little side note, the texture you used on the first door is actually of a kind of wood that is usually cut pretty thin- not very good for making doors. But, aside from that realism aspect, good work!
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Postby Lyberodoggy » Tue Dec 09, 2008 8:09 am

good work!
Something's wrong with the chimney I think :shock:
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Postby mercedes » Tue Dec 09, 2008 8:25 am

Well done Jaked...:D Getting much better with Sketch up...its a hard program to use..

Something's wrong with the chimney I think :shocked:


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Postby Jaked » Wed Dec 10, 2008 3:21 am

Lyberodoggy wrote:Something's wrong with the chimney I think :shock:


What? Do you think the top of the chimney goes up forever? I am going to use this during the final part of the game. Also, Lyberodoggy, I'll try to fix the problem, just tell me what's wrong.
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Postby Zenoc2 » Wed Dec 10, 2008 4:35 am

Question: Did you mean to use that transparent sky texture for the windows? Just seems a little different to me.

This model is shaping up to be a great setting for a game. Good work, but don't stop there! We want more! :P
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Postby mercedes » Wed Dec 10, 2008 9:59 am

Hey ....I think thats what Lyberodoggy meant...the chimney is too long is all...:)..Other than that..Nice work..

Did you mean to use that transparent sky texture for the windows?


I think what he's trying to do is make the sky reflect on the glass..the thing is to do that...the house should be at a slightly different angle..:). At this angle..you would see the ground maybe a half a tree..bottom half...:) At least i think thats what i would put ..:P


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Postby Lyberodoggy » Wed Dec 10, 2008 12:47 pm

mercedes wrote:Hey ....I think thats what Lyberodoggy meant...the chimney is too long is all...:)..Other than that..Nice work...


Yep
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Postby ZeornWarlock » Thu Dec 11, 2008 1:27 am

Jaked,

My only suggestion to your factory if I may would be to change the metal texture to a rusted one. (The part with the switch that is!) The current metal gives the impression that it is ruffled. Otherwise, it looks good. :)

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Postby Jaked » Thu Dec 11, 2008 1:36 am

I am also going to do a magic shop with a hat on top, and I'll take their advice, as well as make a building with slanted glass all around and a glass ceiling, but only if I have time.
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