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by **mosleychris** » Sat Sep 16, 2006 12:48 am

Hey people im new to this bt here sum of my pics im usin in a game im makin
jst wunderin wat u think of them. i can handle critasism

by **Candle** » Sat Sep 16, 2006 2:19 am

Hey people I'm new to this but here some of my pictures I'm using in a game I'm making
just wonder what you think of them. I can handle criticism.

http://www.spellcheck.net/

Please try to spell a little better as we try to be Professional here and it helps others to help you.

by **Mystery** » Sat Sep 16, 2006 1:41 pm

The pictures look nice.

I'm sure that if you keep excercising with your 3D software, you will be able to add some more details that will result in a more realistic impression of your locations. But you have made a good start so far

by **mosleychris** » Sat Sep 16, 2006 5:30 pm

thank you Mystery and sorry candle about my spelling it never crossed my mind, I'm used to text language

by **Mystery** » Sat Sep 16, 2006 5:34 pm

Well, we have here members from all over the world and it is not easy to understand this text language for everyone, so it's better to use as proper English as possible

by **mosleychris** » Sat Sep 16, 2006 6:24 pm

is this picture any better :?:

i am trying to get better and would like to no what you guys think

by **Mystery** » Sat Sep 16, 2006 6:46 pm

Yes, not bad

I would make the pattern of the ground bigger, it seems to be too small. The door is a bit too small in relation to the other objects. Nice stairs

although the wood pattern at its side looks a bit strange, maybe you could make the whole stairs of stone (or of wood).

by **mosleychris** » Sun Sep 17, 2006 6:17 pm

you are right. i have changed some things and tried to make everything seem normal (no small doors) would you say its any better?

by **Mystery** » Sun Sep 17, 2006 6:27 pm

Much better

by **mosleychris** » Sun Sep 17, 2006 6:34 pm

thanks for looking at my pictures. im new and appreciate your thoughts.

by **Mystery** » Sun Sep 17, 2006 6:53 pm

A classroom? Nice.

My thoughts: I would maybe make the window a bit bigger or add a second one. And the pattern and color of the ground and of the chairs are similar, I think that changing the pattern of the chairs would be a good improvement.