after months I've completed my first game
HI ! So your game is finished ? Good ! Congrats !
Tell us more, then !!! story, place, hero, kind of game, puzzles, etc... ! Why this title "Imague" ? Sounds nice.
People won't give their opinion if you don't share more info
And they can't react on the way you used AM with these pictures only !
I personaly don't know Dreamstate, so you see, I can't really react on your pictures because I can't compare your game to anything. You could start by explaining what is Dreamstate, and why you chose that game as a reference ? I'm sorry, but I'm too busy to have a look by myself !
What I could say, is that your game seems very conceptual, which can be a very good thing. And also, don't take it bad, but the textures aren't the greatest I've ever seen :p I tell you this not as a criticism, but to help you improve your work, maybe for your next game !
I have absolutely no objection against simple shapes (spheres, box, pyramids...), basic 3D can be beautiful !
BUT I prefer clean textures than agressive ones, you see what I mean ? To summarize : basic 3D calls basic textures, ok ?
And I know how difficult it can be to work nice textures, so, why make things hard when you can make them easy ?
Just remove all textures and work on lighting and colors !
Wait, pictures speak better than words, so look at this game, Kairo :
http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=92938414&searchtext=
See ? Simple shapes, but nice colors, no textures, and that's great
Easy, I'm sure you can make it ! It's not too late for some modifications, even if you thought your game was "finished" ! I personaly always come back on my old "finished" works and improve them from time to time when I gain skill. An amateur project, when it is question of 3D, is rarely finished, trust me.
Cheers !